Take time each day to write something about your life's journey. Reflect daily on that which has meaning for you. There is always something but we often let the little miracles go unacknowledged. Capture them, cherish them and claim them as part of the wonderment of your life ~ Mary Francis Winters

Monday, 5 October 2015

Good Descriptive Writing ~ from The Infinities by John Banville

  • September heather and gorse -David Parfitt RI - Gallery
  • He sees it in raw April weather, a rinsed blue sky with smudges of cloud, ice-white, bruise-grey, fawn.

  • Spring winds flow through the streets like weightless water.  The blued air of April.  The trees tremble, their wet black branches powdered with puffs of green.  A strong gust pummels the window-panes, making them shiver and throw off lances of light.

  • Reclining on a strew of pillows in the morning's plum-blue twilight.

  • Through gaps in the hedge he catches glimpses of gorse bushes yellowy aflame on the low hillsides, and in the hollows there are lingering blurs of morning mist.

  • I am admiring the gorse blossom:  it is truly glorious, a froth of buttery gold over the hillsides and along the hedgerows.

  • She recalls the dampish light, the smells of moss and musty water, the sunlight a spiked glare of white gold and a swarm of tiny, translucent flies busily weaving an invisible design above the water of the well.

  • Outside, the air has turned to the colour of inky water.

  • It's long past noon and a hazy stillness has settled over the fields.  The trees stand seething in the heat.  The air is grey-blue and lax.  Everything shimmers.

  • From the shaded within, all that is without the high awning of glass, the trees, the sunlight, that broad strip of cerulean  sky seems a raucous carnival.

  • When Adam cuts into the chicken a sigh of steam escapes from the moist aperture between singed skin and moistly creamy flesh.

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